I am splintered; starting to fragment.
What’s with all the blue lately…?
Sensual mutilation; mutualization?
lovely thoughts …..
This line captures the essence of the whole piece
“I am splintered; starting to fragment.”
great write. enjoyed reading.
Take my hand and go to a neverland
where hope is vague although I will
be your master, your choice is few
hopefully my nectar will be your cure.
very well written.
Beautiful write. Very enjoyable to read.
My offeering this week: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/25/she-sat-alone-2/
Very Nice Poetry with an amazing Imagination
Great Work of Creativity !!
It was indeed enjoyable after reading this one !!
Anyways, Take a look some of my Poetry Collections …
some of my Haiku Collections
and also, on my very recent Work as well
!!! Happy Rally !!!
You’re right, what’s with all the blue? Must be something in the air. Interesting write.
Very creative and interesting poem. Liked it very much.
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