On You

Weather the storm; storms.
Gait them.
About face and straddle;
mount them.
Decimate it; let the universe mourn.


About RyanC

I have no answers...just lessons learned from mistakes
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8 Responses to On You

  1. lovely…
    thanks for sharing.

  2. Like this. Simple phrasing, but unique concept. Love the idea of straddling a storm. Looking forward to reading more.

  3. kshawnedgar says:

    Mounting storms, that’s good.

  4. thingy says:

    This has the feel of an Auden poem. Wonderful.

  5. Kay Salady says:

    Yes! Let her weep!
    What a powerful poem and filled with so much power in such a few lines.

  6. eloquent words…

    thanks for sharing, welcome joining poets rally week 51 today.

  7. Deandra says:

    Your’s is a point of view where real inelltigence shines through.

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